How can I improve this beginning?

Gav Brown Asked: How can I improve this beginning?All Declan could see through the scrubby underbrush was a pair of hands, tied behind the slim oak. The rope that bound the palms together was wound so tightly that color had already fled the fingertips, leaving them a sickly whitish-yellow. Declan shifted, trying to see more, but his mother's hands encircled his chest even more tightly, her nails digging sharply into his ribs. "Still!" she breathed, the word quiet but filled with

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